Revise your Topic Sentence from Block 11

CTE Standard: 11-12.5. Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying B1.0 a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience.

​During Block 11, we wrote a paragraph. Today, you are revising the topic sentence you wrote for that paragraph. *I sent you a copy of your paragraph by email on Wed 2/17 to both your @fresnoU.org AND @edisoncomputech.com accounts* If you do not have it from me, you did not get it turned in on time and will need to find your copy from your records.

1. Read and understand the resource How to Write A Topic Sentence.
2. Then, re-write your topic sentence. I will be looking to make sure you incorporated what the short article in step 1 taught you.
3. Turn in your new topic sentence here: